the spread of white
like the flowing flat spotless white gown of an ice-maiden
the smoky white cover
like the layers of smoke emitting from thousands of chimneys
the eerie white stretch
like the eeriness of a black night turned dark white
the sorrrowful serene white
like a widow’s saree, covering her sorrow helplessly
the whispers of a white silence
like the noise of screams, unheard, emitting from the unuttered
from the middle of the white
arose a half-awake sun
trying not so hard to remove the white blankets
trying to stay in the coziness of the white
trying not to shun
for today, it’s gonna leave its job half-done
If you think this poem deserves a title, then suggest one.
TrOuBlE BuBbLe (",) 
Helplessly White!
muah ladoo…teri jaan lenge kya kaam par?
hugsss
Ladoooooooooooooo meri ladooooooooo meh yaha huuuuuuuu…awww!! ajaa kasam se…ek pal ye bhi ata thu mujeh kehti…ki insaan itni freedom bhi na deh kisiko…..dar jaathi!
Dekh if you dont get wella…it can go to hell….Estolan zaroor mil jayegi thuje…this too is cream based in a jar! apply after every shampoo….for a week…and then drop it to once a week…or twice a week…to be applied immediatley after shampoo…if u dont have time to sit for an hour!
muah love!
Dont forget to use general basic bottle conditioners after every shampoo though! thats a routine!
When using this cream ones you dont use the bottle ones!
smile
nice one… enjoyed reading this one… 🙂 call it… "white"… haha… I am not very creative am I? 🙂
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Relentless and Mystical White…yeah I should probably keep my day job eh? ~smiles~
I know of the darkest light/whites and light within the darkness ~smiles~. I loved the read!
Love,
Adam
pagli ye kyu likha….
UnStAbIlItY Personfied 😀
Agar thu khudko unstable kahehgi…tho baki khud ko kya kahenge….
You are able to express….what more is stability?
hugs pagli
Hi Divoo,
I have been reading your blog for quite some time now and must say it is very nice. I wanted to write a comment on one your blogs that you had written "My hatreds unleashed!!" but I never got time to do that but as they say better late than never.
I agree with whatever you have written in that blog especially the part on being skinny cos I have gone through that stage. I just wanted to let you know that you are not alone in whatever you think and also the fact that most people dont realize that not everybody is similar and thinks alike, different Individuals have different views and opinions and we need to understand and respect each one’s individuality.
Take care and happy blogging.
title. . hmm . .
ujala safedi ?? hows dat ?>?>
or .. The Expression – WHITE , or What Is White . .
Or aLL tHAT mAKES uP wHITE ..
oye .. the best one .. DIcOo & WhItE <— The best tittle .
chalo Njoi . .
why u gussa ?? . . DQ aunty de comments hunde hi itne intresting ne .. ki kariye .. tuhade blog to pehlan uhna de comments hi par lainda haan . . 😀
Buhh Byee ..
manDy WhItE
Aisa kohra dekhe hue bahut din ho gaye! That used to get me staying put on my bed under the blankets till it was warm enough to come out for a walk n a tea 🙂
" The Colour White" or "Whitenss Personified" should be the correct title to your poem. Colours are very relative, seen in a global context. In many cultures, white is seen as the colour of purity and serenity, and carries positive connotations. In others, white is disliked due to it’s association with widowhood. On the other hand, black is shunned in Hindu communities, as it is the colour of evil, whereas, today wearing black means you are a fashionista and very sophisticated.
The way one looks at colours largely governs the way one dresses.
Bye Divoo…do drop in! Love, Rumadi.
Incomplete Radiance .. thats what i would call it as a title.
Coming to yr comment on my blog, .. i meant what i said 🙂 you deserve it and welcome always. Take care, peace !!
the spread of whitelike the flowing flat spotless white gown of an maiden who never entered the kitchenthe smoky white coverlike the layers of smoke emitting from thousands of cigarette smokers the eerie white stretchlike the eeriness of a black night turned haunted white
(Eh! Forget the sadness of white….. Come on Divoo…)the sorrowful serene whitelike a widow’s saree, covering her sorrow with purity
the whispers of a white silencelike the voice of joy, heard, though without any sound or wordsfrom the middle of the whitearose a wide awake suntrying to remove the white blanketstrying to cover hazy whiteness with its raystrying to shine at the top of the all black whitesfor today, it’s another day, its not gonna leave its job half-done
Title?? : God!!! Give Divoo A Break.
Have Fun, Noor
"the other side of white"
The white colour: In Japan we used for our wedding kimono(dress) it shows the virgin worman
also used for the hospital for keeps cleanliness.
The dining table with white plate and white napkin again formal dinner.
I do likes white snow…isn’t beautiful?
Enjoy your day,
Michiko
Always nice to read ur poems Divy I like them
white-the colour of peace and love…
The smallest word i know is "I"
The sweetest word i know is "MISS"
and the person i never forget is "YOU"
…
have a good week!
(^^)v cheers
When a human is able to percieve and express his/her perception means there is stability to question each thought……unstable people don’t percieve nor do they question nor do they seek for answers within…..and each human is a stable being…..many factors make them unstable…but then why should one underestimate herself?
hi divs
am here….fine nw…gonna blog soon..
Hi Bubble,how are you? What a beautiful composition 🙂
The tranquility of white
spreading the message of peace and calm,the rays depicting hope…. that it shall be possible
The undispersed white light
that breaks into the vibgyor when passing through a prism
Would call your poem ‘hope’,as this is how is visualise the picture!
The fast went well,thanks :)!! The moon came out late as usual..9pm….it has always been late in the 16 yrs of my married life 🙂
Its natural to feel why should one keep a fast for your husband when there is no fast that men keep for their wives! And maybe you have found the ‘one’ you want to spend rest of your life with,might have acted as a catalyst resulting in this change of mind! Its pure love and feelings accompanied with it that makes you want to do it and realising that it has really nothing to do with male dominance! So bubble,are you in love???? 😀 …ahem ahem……..! Feel you are 🙂 and girl,its the most beautiful feeling alive!! Gives you a reason to live,a lifetime with a man,accepting the goods and the bad,each others differences and irritants ,which makes the relationship whole!
Got henna put,did not wear a saree,prefer a churidar with a short kurta :D,little jewellery (dont dress heavily)!!Sanaa’s foot is grt,thanks! She had a district level meet on the 10th! My morning was spent in Jawahar lala Nehru stadium,cheering them,she got a gold in her event,that qualifies her for Nationals that are scheduled to be held in Bangalore in Nov!! 🙂
Tc and have a grt day!
Love And hugs
Dids
Hello Divoo,
What a read this one is. Maybe for a title could be "Mystic Haze of White." It is a poem that is hard for a person other than the author to name for the author is the only one who knows the true meaning of what has been written. OH Am I good at teaching bad grammar;)
Thank you for your kind words about my post. If we could just get people to listen to them, it would be so much better. Unfortunately, there are people who know what they are getting into and do it anyway. They then want sympathy for their mistakes. Life as it goes along its merry way.
Peace & Blessings.
hey divoo,
i loved this poem, but could notthink of any suitable title.
i am comical even otherwise, so with incidences like these i make a perfect role model for all things comical.. 🙂 it is embarassing at times, but better laugh at myself than feel awkward…
how r things with you. did u see the movie on weekend?? i was at home experimenting with glass paints and unusable cds!! :))))
Will do the expose of the culprit probably by end of the week…keep watching the space 🙂
Hey bubble…. nice poem…. so what inspired it? hmmmm title? hmmm…………………….. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm….can you see I’m thinking hard but still nothing comes to mind>?? haha…..
ok…how about hmmmmmmmmm……………… Transluscent… or……. The absence of….
ok, forget it. None of those titles are gonna work. Hope all is ok!
HI DIVOO,
You know what you are a class act u should be Miss Intellectual instead …
TITLE…………UMmmmmmmmmmmm aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
soch soch soch soch soch ………….uffffff ufffffffff
Pata nahi …
Yeah i will try i can come up with more of my Ideas…..
Take care & Have a great weekend..
Rohit.
What bout this " THE SORROW OF WHITE "……
I look like a specimen right now…half legs waxed…half arms waxed….
Did god have bear in his mind when he made me??
auffffff!!
an ODE TO WHITE
WHITE – A PRELUDE
Can’t think of something good (i’m no geek seeker :D)….
– The colors in white
– Vibrant surrealism
– White, and everything else
– A color that speaks
– White monologue
Damn… no good. I quit!