I saw the silver drops on your skin,
shining naughty on your broad shoulders
I saw them trickle down your neck,
onto the chest, and glisten on
the lustrous stretch of the dark hair
I could see how desperate they were,
those thirsty drops,
aroused by the smell of your bare body
I could feel them shiver
and my heart waver
I could sense the urge
to run a finger down your shoulder,
trace some somethings on your chest,
brush my breath against your neck,
and whisper in your ear,
something that you cannot hear,
but that makes the adrenaline rush through your bod
and sends a current down mine,
the desperation, the urge, the fear
the sighs, the moans, the tears
TrOuBlE BuBbLe (",) 
ahem somebody missing Noname guy???
man ur so good at this write me a poem on sex lololol Please i’ll tell rahul tht i borrowed a poem 😉
discreet divoo, who is HE?
btw, amazingly expressed!As usual.
Bobby
hmmm..divoo… 😉 kiddin
i finally got back to writing but im having starting trouble all over again…guess what i do for a living now…im a content writer…haha…but i write absolute crap…make up tips, beauty tips, (waht the hell do i know about make up in the first place) but im having fun…how u been?
Divs:
Am doin peace, thanks a lot for asking – how have u been? My space is crawling at a snail’s pace because things out here are pretty busy, hardly get some quality time to update it but it will work out within next 2 weeks .. i hope.
Every time i come here, there is a new dress for my eyes to see and must say – eyes are smiling. U take care, stay in touch :)) Peace !!
Hi Divya!
Just read ur comment.. I have never been tagged so can u explain me what do I have to do in that tag??!.. as I know and have understood frm ur written comment- about tht thr is a tag- tht i have to write another article on how smile is painful and how its ruins et cetera.. and to disclose whr I am based at present. and then I have to post it. is tht right wht i understand? well, if not, then pls do explain.. tag things dont get into my head, kabhi kiya nahi hai.. 🙂
and now, about ur poem –… wow! by the way (btw) how do u happen to write such beautiful poems with amazing imagery involved. I mean, we learn this in English so it is at the tip of my tongue! lol.
and , its a beautiful poem… u knw wht, I think, tht every poem is nice coz it depends on who has written it and wht life situation is tht person in.. but then whoever writes poem has a deep perspective of life.. as what i’ve seen in people… yeah:-) aaj k liye kaafi hai na? lol hehe!!
and, now, thanks for the following-
my first memory with u is of the poem "Inspiration" . I wrote it with lots of hope and real inspiration I get from her. 🙂 she is elder to me.
and tht u associate me with blue color whcih is my fav and white which I like .. as in my projects too, and my books et cetera… walls of my room.. 🙂 so yes, ur right! its getting displayed from my space too.. 🙂
and rabbit is a nice animal,.. 🙂 hehe.. and tht was cute of u to say tht am utterly butterly bubbly.. lol lol lol .. hehe.. 🙂 too many smileys na? lol.
and, yea.. kya yaar.. u really like my way of commenting.. lol. thnks for tht coz not everyone does so! ohhoo lol.. i mean all these in a positive sense!! ok?
chalo, see u later then, bye:-)
Nice bubble …..is it the pic or a "pic" of someone special ;-)!! Grt description, can almost feel it…see it…hear it!!
"dids" wd do just grt :-)!!
Now its your turn he he,since you have posted it, i am just responding 🙂
1)Live up to your name…bubbly!! Wonderful down to earth person!
2)Reveal the name of the someone spl
3)Would say the complete colours of the rainbow because of your myraid moods…funny,intense,romantic,bubbly……
4)I like your attitude towards life,you come across as a genuine person! you write beautifully!!
5)The memory wd be ,when you posted the picsof the sun by "no name" guy and ppl were assuming that you two had something going on :-)!
6)You remind me of a monkey because of your nature :-),
7)What is your real name? What else do you enjoy in life?
8)you have already posted it
tc and have agrt day!! I have a long day today,taking my girl out for shopping because "she has NO CLOTHES to wear" as she claims (sigh)!! God Bless me,we usually come back arguing as the kind og clothes she wants, i dont agree to it!! Life takes a full circle and stands and laughs……did the same to my mum…now she gets the last laugh!!
love
sonia
HEY!
GREAT POEM … DIFFERENT FRM THE ONES U NORMALLY RIGHT….
Hi Divoo!!! Another masterpiece. This is beauty. Yes Divya, whenever, wherever you’re published, I’ll read that. And also will give it to Saad to read in future. Why you call yourself ‘Trouble Bubble’. Your poetry is like smoothly flowing water. This is raining outside my window when I’m writing these lines. And I remember "… the soft rain / falling on my window / ..but I could smell it …." . Hey Divoo, complete peace of mind. Keep on writing, whether for noname, or for us. Regards,
Noor
Hi Divoo Thanks for your lovely
comments WOW
hey you are extremely talented
writing all those poems
wish I had that gift but NO
i do love poetry and I am glad you came
and shared your space with me
well done I shall return
HuGs Noelle x x xx
Divoo dear, I’m outta words. This was one amazing piece of writing. I’ve read it umpteen times as of now.
The last two lines were awesome…
the desperation, the urge, the fearthe sighs, the moans, the tears
the bliss, the feel… when you were near
the eyes that spoke and dilated with fear
the words unsaid yet understood
words that brought joy, words that brought tears
another attempt by me 🙂
Divoo
Never read a more sensual poem like this
wow Its breathtaking
I like it Im speechless
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
I see it happen ….
GO ON
A huggy from Sweeti
hello from Japan.
i like the picture you show.
this is a greeting from me.
have a good day
(^^)v peace!
doesnt interest youuuuuuuu????
then what the hell ru desperate for 😀 :P:P:P;)
awww cmon i have exams..no time for poetry have put all challenges on hold.
It is good to see you writing again. It has been me that has disappeared this last week. My wife had vacation so I let her on the computer while I played Xbox ~smiles~. That is a cool abstract, did you paint it?
Love,
Adam
Thank you for that sweet comment..
Yes i like red its very passionate and yes it would be nice if we became friends.. : )
I’ll keep coming by to visit you don’t worry hehe
and btw nice poem very sensual…
jUST HAD TO POP IN & SHOT YA COS I’M A GANSTA OF LOVE LOL__-___________________/\_ / `—___________—-_____|] = = = = = = D /_==o;;;;;;;;_______.:/ ), —.(_(__) / // (..) ), —-" //___// //___// //___// BANG BANG !!!
YOU HAVE BEEN SHOT BY THE FRIENDSHIP GUN NOW U HAVE TOSHOOT SOME PPL YOU THINK ARE FRIENDLY!! IF YOU GET SHOTMORE THAN ONCE YOU KNOW YOU HAVE FRIENDS!!
lOVE YA & CYA SOONLOVE CYN
Hi Divoo!
How r u?
And, yes! I am fine! I am in NZ. 🙂 🙂
Forgot this yesterday! Sorry!
Ipsh
Wohooo Those are some nice expressive words
I am sure thats smthing more then the usual work but I hope to see more of these ones.
I am sure its keeping things all close and cool .. nd indeed the Title, Desperation 🙂
Read it thrice and still invite me to read it once again .. ha ha haaa – gud work.
Hey that TFV is for making an effort to drop by, which still is something only few people do and nothing that would stop me to tell it to the ones who does this by just catching up with me and my virtuousity of presence. So dont think it as stupid way but its something Crazy which i still like to see from others.
I wud just say that again whether u like it or you dont, it really keeps it going smooth.
A small and a distant hug through the distance of few clicks.
keep that happiness flowing in and making you smile .
Cherish the moments 😉
-M-
Hi Divoo, How are you doing? Shopping yesterday with Sannaa was,for a change, a n ice experience!! Esp without the whining or maybe she could sense my irritation 🙂 and did not pull me further!! How is work? Is it hectic?
I love the rain too and love books! I am partial to indian authors and enjoy books that have a realistic feel to them :-)!!
Take good care and have a grt day
love
Dids
(love that)
hmmm that was a real erotic foreplay poem..*ahem* read the comment on Sups’
very beautiful one & I feel the desire & desperation creeping in me…
hey where is the rain & of course, Prav?? Need two for it na!
hhahaa!
in BTW share a secret, think I tagged u – tell me who is the inspiration for the foreplay poem?? lol!!
love
Nids