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Silly I (for those who’ve not read part I)
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I still feel so silly
I still feel like a fool
I still lie in the thought pot
I still wonder at the pool.
I still wonder at the pool
I dunno if I’d ever scream
I wonder how I’m bearing
the heat of the steam.
The heat of the steam
that’s intensifying with each passing day
I’m waiting for the pot to burst
I’m waiting to find a way.
I’m waiting to find a way
outta the thought pot
I wonder if I’d stroll out
I wonder if I’d trot.
I wonder if I’d trot
and end up in another pool
I wonder at this thoughtfulness
and the thoughtful journey of a fool.
the 13raine said:
..i feel silly reading a ‘sequel’ to a poem labeled silly. duh.
anyways…silly I like. the sequel…is a so-so…nevermind.
‘silly’ 13rain.
Mandeep said:
nice and simple/….
gud work divoooooo
now i will try ….
is still feel so silly reading this silly poemby a silly artist who is a kidoo
who is a kidooher name is divooworks as a technical writerand writes poems as wel
and writes poems as welland some stotries toobut one thing which we dont find very often isthey all are true
they all are truebased on true experiences and that is one thing which sets her apart from the rest
sorry jst kiddin .. im not trying to make fun of ur wondreful poem …… jst trying my bit wid ur style ….
Take care
God bless you
~!~! Mandy !~!~
supriya said:
*NUDGE*
why divvo
dont do this.
it reminds me of myself.
Abhishek Baxi said:
I wonder… why u wonder, dear. Stay ez lady n tk care of urself.
Nuthin much at my end… casually striding. Glad tht u r plannin a happening weekend this time. Keep rockin’
Stunzzer said:
ummmm divooooooooo
u neeeeeeeeeeed a big breakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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♥ яσѕнηι ♥ said:
Hi Divoo! Thanks for the lovely comments on my space!I have an update do check it out too!
Nice poem!But I still feel you’re not okay!
Cheer up gal!
Happiness is as a butterfly which,
when pursued is always beyond our grasp,
but if you sit down quietly may alight upon you!!!
Happiness is not found at the end of the road,
it is experienced along the way.
So take not for granted each moment of your life
and you will find a reason to be happy each day
So sit down and enjoy!!!Be happy!! Always!!!
Love,Luck n Happiness,
♥ ŕόşħήί ♥
Imran said:
yeah u r a fool ……
m sleepy … i wanna sleep
Vijay Krishnan said:
You’ve really gotten the silly poems going good 🙂 As for the downtrodden…so far I’ve just been able to do good with my thought and a few occassional deeds….need to get more action in that area…maybe once I m comfortable with my career n stuff. As for speeches…I guess we Indians can always give great ones…just like the ppl who represnt us 🙂
Neil said:
You silly billy. This was a really down to earth read. Nice!!
Adam said:
Silly can be quite entertaining ~smiles~. However in the poem it seems you are a bit troubled by something and trying to find the way to break free of it.
Keep up the good writing ~smiles~
Adam
FreeBird's said:
So much human…
everyone feels the same at one time in their lives…
Being so Silly at what they r doing.
CheerS-M-
Guneet said:
hey there….
this poem to me seems circular…..like the spirals in the brain…u try to run away from an end only to converge at the beginning once more…..
Ah, the mind is a restless creature….
good….its all good….
……ekta.
Stunzzer said:
Where are u silly trouble it has been days not seen uuuuuuuuuuuu
More than 1 mouse is mice
More than 1 spouse is spice
Mandeep said:
hola
how u doin >?
and hey u hcnt even visited my space..
waise u didnt comment on my new entry..
lolz
tc !~
R said:
Great…………….the calling says that a good writer is a virtue,and gifted like being pregnant
pregnant with knowledge and insight………………I think you have it
regards
savio
supriya said:
sill milly billy nillyyy
Stunzzer said:
IT has BEEN MANY DAYS i havent seen u ……..
what happned
supriya said:
come back divooo
Kadir said:
Oh Silly, all you need is a change of scene.
And of course, you are welcome to Blore. May be thats the change od scene? haha am i working that way? 😀
♥ pebble$ ♥ said:
thiz is niccce !!! 🙂 luv it both of em
~pebb$ …
Fαтιмα said:
wow i like this way of writing "the beginning begins with the end"
it sounds a little bit philosophical, lol ^^