I beg you
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t kill
the painter within
The painter who’s painted you
out and in
The painter who’s colored
the grays of my sin.
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t kill
the painter within
The painter who’s painted you
out and in
The painter who’s colored
the grays of my sin.
I beg you
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t strangulate
the nightingale within
The nightingale who’s sung for you
out and in
The nightingale who’s sung away
the blues from under my chin.
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t strangulate
the nightingale within
The nightingale who’s sung for you
out and in
The nightingale who’s sung away
the blues from under my chin.
I beg you
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t pluck
the flower within
The flower who’s blossomed
out and in
The flower who’s fragrance
is wavering under my skin.
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t pluck
the flower within
The flower who’s blossomed
out and in
The flower who’s fragrance
is wavering under my skin.
I beg you
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t blow out
the candle within
The candle who’s flame has danced
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please don’t blow out
the candle within
The candle who’s flame has danced
out and in
The candle who’s shown me the path
to the door of your inn.
The candle who’s shown me the path
to the door of your inn.
I beg you
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
I swear by the painter,
the nightingale, the flower,
and the candle within.
I promise I’ll give in, O honey,
let me sit at the door of your heart
and I’d sit there till you let me in.
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
I swear by the painter,
the nightingale, the flower,
and the candle within.
I promise I’ll give in, O honey,
let me sit at the door of your heart
and I’d sit there till you let me in.
Farah said:
the pic scares me…its sorta like tears of blood…the poem’s touchin tho…
FreeBird's said:
~~ I beg You !!! .
Best one till date …
-m-
FreeBird's said:
Thanks D,
I think it was sheer Co-incidence…bt just smthin about finding that some one is checking our spaces.. regularly…
Coool naaaaaaaa…
Keep it comin, u got a place to stay on my blogosphere permanently now…
Much Love
-M-
D said:
sum 1 plz call 911… heeeeeheeeeeeee… id luv to get tips on shootin arrowz… i fink id end up doin a betta job den cupid…
FreeBird's said:
Thanks D 🙂
Wwell… the real pics are still a little far away..
I am sure I can make u fall in an in and in with my pics very soon
just that.. u have to wait a little while since my home PC is not working and I m running short of place to work on my pics to bring em online…
CheerS
-M-
Mandeep said:
i m sorry dear if said some thing wrong abt ur profession
i apologise for ma mistake
sorry
was not knowing abt technical writing (well still dont know much abt it)
and msdn every one like it ……. dont know much abt it have heard abt it but have just started programmming so dont require lib rite now ..
wats EDA , API ???
Take Care
God Bless You
~~!! DiMpY !!~~
Mandeep said:
u write alot !!!!
a new poem so soonn
grt work but
consider a change of professin try writting poetry instead u wil earn big bucks and grt fame tooooo !!!
ur work’s awseme !!
Neil said:
Again, the image is terrific. But after reading this poem, it seems that you are head-over-heels for someone who is not ready to accept you as the person you are. But I ask, is it truly worth dedicating a poem to such an individual? I am not trying to imply that this poem is applicable for you in real life. Maybe it is, maybe it isn’t! But it simply sounds like a poem written by a lovesick girl. I apologize if I am being too direct but these are just my throughts. On the other hand, if you don’t read too deeply into the meaning, it is quite an expressive work.
Perfect Symmetry said:
umm , i dont mean to be rude . but may i know who is this ……..i got a comment on my space
supriya said:
hmmm what happened divoo?
u seem to be crying out in love..who’s the guy messing around with our sweet divoo?
Azriela said:
hmm trying to figure this entry out… whts it pertaining to?
Apurva said:
nice one there…. resistance to succumb…hain’??
cheers
z
Kadir said:
Its such a nice poem but with lot of pain. Hope you are doing ok.
hey divo, take care alrite.
Adam said:
Cool, keep up the good heart-works ~smiles~
Adam
♥ яσѕнηι ♥ said:
Hi! Good to see you on my space again.
Hey! watz wrong?You still seem pretty upset.
Don’t be cheer up!!!
Life is a grindstone.
Whether it grinds us down
or polishes us up depends on us.
Don’t let it grind you!
Every day can be a beautiful day.Just take a look around you and think about all of thewonderful things you have to be thankful for…the sunshine, roses, laughter, close friends, family,and beautiful dreams.The storm is never half as bad as it seems.Don’t let the rain ruin your day.When the dark clouds move in just smile,because the good times are on the way.
Cheer up Divoo!
Perfect Symmetry said:
NO! you dint do anyhting wrong , i was just curious cause ur probalby the first person to say that the colour of my space was nice
and like you said
peace
supriya said:
Reminds me of myself–extreme. but am learning how to cope with it, learning how to not be jumpy..its been a lesson all since last month..when things go wrong keep ur cool and be calm, u might not sail through it, u will somehow reach the shore, someone might help you, and even if u dont sail across u’ll learn to find alternative solutions and change ur course of action. its the coping with troubled times..its all in the attitude i guess!
*hugs*
u can do it girl. i know u can.
sillygloop said:
I beg you
O honey, I promise I’ll give in
But please dont access
the software within
The software whose code got blown
out and in
The software whose maker has flown
to the retreat for eternal sin
🙂
Abhishek Baxi said:
Dunno wht to say… A hug for u. Hope it helps, divoo.
U cn connect with me if u wanna talk. A wise man said, talkin helps.
Take care n keep the faith.
Abhishek Baxi said:
Just stumbled on to ur blogroll list and saw my blog posted there. Thanx for the same.
Keep rockin’
P.S. Can u change the name from baxiabhishek to Console.WriteLine("Hello World!");, my blog’s name
Ashesh said:
Awesome!!! Words are so rich when you write and when I want to express my feelings about your expression being so great…bloody they are failing me. Sorry for being such a miser with my compliment but something arebetter left unsaid. Like u left me SPEECHLESS.
bRAVO. Carry on Lady Bard.
Here’s my standing ovation.
Bobby (ashesh mallick)
Ashesh said:
I AM BACK AND THIS TIME ITS FOR GOOD.
THNKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS. IT WRKED WONDERS FOR ME.
THNKS A MILLION DEAR.
sandeep said:
woah…nice….
poetry is truly the art of all arts…
no update from me cos im working. yes. this lazy bum has finally got a kob. but i work at night so its sucks cos my already non existent social life has completely and oh so truly flat lined….
i’m working on something though…idea’s brewing…the mind just not too willing right now…
ta!
ownlife said:
aww…
willing to give in to someone who threatens to deprive you of what makes you you? and who is this person who threatens to do so- you yourself? because that is how it is for me. I’m constantly having disagreements with myself!
Well, evidently in your cae that is not so, but anyway.
and no, don’t let the painter ie, don’t let the nightingale stop singing, don’t let the flower wilt, don’t let the candle burn out
R said:
outstanding
ritika said:
one of the best works of poetry tht i’ve come across recently…………u have some way with words…
tc
regards
ritika
Born said:
hello again.
Nice rhyme i loved it.and the thoughts were precious as well.
Kim said:
its a brilliant piece of writing n i really admire it!